Thursday, October 4, 2012

A Glow Worm And A Firefly Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dressed up for the mating night,
Never known it's for two weeks delight,
Rolled and sucked all alive under the earth,
The small lights even in the eggs, glow under the dark.
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Ruby Honeytip 21 November 2012

Wow...again....really great: -)

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Ravi Sathasivam 16 October 2012

Excellent. Well penned. Tfs

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Bradley Cox 05 October 2012

wonderful job great write

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Spiritual Seeker 05 October 2012

Till now, I love to watch glow worm and firelies....it bring joy to the heart! It still fly around my house occasionally...great poem. A 10.

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Dave Walker 05 October 2012

A fantastic poem, liked it, a great write.

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William Jackson 04 October 2012

Nice poem. I loved collecting fireflies at dusk in a jar when I was a boy. I would keep them through the night in my room and release them unharmed the next morning.

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