Live the life in a beautiful way
Only one precious life we are gifted with.
Cure the wound before its too deep
Let us take control of its wings
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You write with such lovely images that seep into our souls and create that glow within! Take a deep dive into it, Drink it till not your thirst is quenched. Breathe it, mingle with its peaceful fragrance. Sing and dance along when it thunders and rains Shed the tears like flood and Free it from all the clouds of pain mounted. Let it be like the Earth washed with heavenly rains To feel the coolness of breath from within.- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -Absolutely could not be bettered. You nailed this in every way. There is no better writing than this to illustrate your point about living life to the full
A beautiful write full of wise thoughts, Geetha! It kindles a luminous glow within! (10)
like a pure liquid raindrop, it so precious and rare in the desert....thats how healing it felt when reading this thanks!
You are very true. This life is precious really. This is specially gifted to us. Taking deep dive we can feel this. Heavenly rains wash pain of Earth. This carries wisdom. This poem is really very interesting one shared here with motivational words.10.An excellent poem this is.
Words of wisdom flowed effortlessly through this poem. The poem itself is a glow and emits light of positivity through each line. Loved the poem entirely and the caption too. 'Only one precious life we are gifted with. Cure the wound before its too deep' - The lines are awakening, readers pause to ponder a while. Congratulations Geetha, on your excellent composition!