From the meads of night
Stars are peeping unto a temple ground.
And upon a stone pillar
A solitary earthen oil lamp
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A distant bark, a singular footstep, A sudden cry of a bird............... visually vivacious & poetically proficient... rgrds/salu
Above all the comments below what is left for me to say except that you are a top poet....a favourite poem...will be lingering in mind ever
wonderfull write on the glory of a wick that lights up the world around it and end up sacrificing itself. i have never thought one day a poet will do this poem.well done and well thought.posted 10 for u surya
Great imagery and descriptive poetry. Your metaphors, surrealistic pictures are vivid and tangible to readers.
great imagery used and fine poetic language....penned with zeal...10
And there- she lights the night dimly Burning a better life than the distant stars.......though dimly light, , we have to burn for better life that distant stars fail to deliever.. what i smore important in today's life is how ordinary way you show the path to others... lovely imagination with correct guidence....10 at cross road.....bitter words