A Glorious Brightness Comments

My deep love is stolen by the night excellent line its like a LUNAR DAY 14 DAYS BRIGHT THEN 14 DAYS DARKNESS

Nine three liners very nicely intertwined and makes it a beautiful poem! 'We unite as our love swallows the hate As we cherish our moments Our beautiful fate, God is sweeping our pain away, The beat of the music is the heartbeat of our day, A celebration of our passion in are garden of flowers standing tall' - these are the best two stanzas that I liked most.

Beautifully written, mesmerizing in cadence, it hold the reader spellbound till the end, and wanting more.

As the light never falls, it is like a stepping stone To our lovers throne, As the night creeps away alone..... beautiful lines

There is a light at the end of every tunnel and your poem is guiding light inside the tunnel. A wonderful poem.

I would love to give you a 10 but there is no voting booth - -is this a problem with just my computer or is everyone experiencing this problem?

God is sweeping our pain away- - -every day in every way! ! ! This is a wise line to include in this poem- -well thought out piece here, dear Hazel

ma'am All your poems I have scanned have a tinge of blue and reddish hue lovely poetess r u with a A STANDING OVATION we must adorn you bring garland all poets of PH will you

(cont.) 2 - I like the rhyming. And I liked “lovers throne” though at first i thought making “lovers” into “lovers’ “ might be ‘right’; i changed my mind. :) This is good for romantics, of which i’m NOT one. Ha ha. Bri (“

1- .....in are garden of flowers standing tall, ...change are to our. i like this poem but would reconfigure some stanzas, moving some lines into other stanzas, and i’d change some present tense verbs to past tense verbs to more accurately say when the 'dark' stuff happened [in the past i think]. “The beat of the music is the heartbeat of our day, ” i’d be tempted to change to: “The beat of our hearts is the music of our days.” (cont.)

We unite as our love swallows the hate As we cherish our moments Our beautiful fate, ...Great poem, thanks for sharing.

'As the light never falls, it is like a stepping stone To our lovers throne, As the night creeps away alone. '.. is excellent lines. So long as the light of love keeps glowing life looks beautiful. Loved te use of imagery. Thanks for sharing.

I love how each stanza progressively intermingle, as a contrast of light and darkness; of past and present; of memories and the reality of the present moment: all creating a wonderful culmination in the last stanza: As the light never falls, it is like a stepping stone To our lovers throne, As the night creeps away alone. '' - A fantastic composition!

God is sweeping our pain away, The beat of the music is the heartbeat of our day, From the caverns of darkness and pain, you are brought into the sunny space of light and joy! Love can work such miracles! Enjoyed this poem about the mental transition!

Dear madam, this poem of deep love in two heart in the title A Glorious Brightness' has been astutely and incisively delineated by you in such a way that any reader will appreciate it. Each line is touching and impredsive. I cite..God is sweeping our pain away, / The beat of the music is the heartbeat of our day, / A celebration of our passion in are garden of flowers standing tall, Outstanding.10

This is an impressive tribute to light! 10!

God is sweeping our pain away, The beat of the music is the heartbeat of our day, A celebration of our passion in are garden of flowers standing tall, Such perfect and lovely lines, you have a way with words.

The light never fades, The light never dies, ...... yes. universal, great done, thanks for sharing the poem with us,10