Sunday, October 12, 2008

A Gloomy Sky Comments

Rating: 5.0

I don't know why I fail to sleep at nights
I don't know what's going through my mind
I don't know why the sky appears so gloomy
I don't know what exactly I am unable to find
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Deependra Kumar Jha
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Ridge Cahill 08 February 2009

I love the concept and structure of this poem. It is thoughful and concise in its search and a very good read. Well done.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 28 November 2008

Touch my memories and hold my thought..........i'll be with you...forever.Nice works Kumar.

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Kesav Easwaran 20 October 2008

very much expressive...here, the memories alone keep the life moving on...good piece 10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 19 October 2008

Eloquent......ryhm/rythm/flow/thoughts ammmmmmazing! ......10+

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