Wednesday, July 28, 2010

A Gloomy Day Comments

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Dark clouds fill the sky,
It's a sad and gloomy day.
The wind and the rain, starting to fly,
The sun can't spare one single ray.
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Juan Olivarez
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Okan Emanet 28 July 2010

Really influential in many respects... Though simple words are used, they have been provided with a different aura and they are reflected in another atmosphere. I congratulate you on that wonderful poem...

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Joyce Hemsley 28 July 2010

Very 'clever' poem...Joyce

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