I met you in the morning
when the dew was on the
lawn
feeling I had known you
...
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Absolutely beautiful poem! I love your skilful control of imagery and metaphor here
This poem still makes my heart pump faster. Beautiful poem. Siya_! !
..a perfect poetic gift to the person you love..short be very sweet...
I met you in the morning when the dawn was on the lawn. Awesome! ! !
Reflections of love mirrored by you leaves the reader with thoughts of love beautiful Heather...regards
Excellent! Short and simple, yet so deep! Morning till evening...only thought of you, and at last, caught a glimpse when looked at myself in the mirror. Brilliant idea of engulfing love!
From dawn to dusk the mind is occupied with only one thought of the beloved...an emotional write.
A bit of solitude and longing. Brief but deeper! I loved it! ! ! !
wew... you really did a very good poem... it looks like a you're guessing someone :))
In fact it is so beautiful to read and recite.