Sunday, July 7, 2013

A Glimpse Of You Comments

Rating: 4.8

I met you in the morning
when the dew was on the
lawn
feeling I had known you
...
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Heather Burns
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In fact it is so beautiful to read and recite.

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In fact it is so beautiful to read and recite.

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 07 May 2014

Absolutely beautiful poem! I love your skilful control of imagery and metaphor here

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Captain Herbert Poetry 24 April 2014

Nice words on a glimpse

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 22 April 2014

This poem still makes my heart pump faster. Beautiful poem. Siya_! !

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Maya Hanson 28 March 2014

Beautiful and inspiring, love it!

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Rigzin Namgyal 06 October 2013

..a perfect poetic gift to the person you love..short be very sweet...

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Tameeka Smith 19 September 2013

I met you in the morning when the dawn was on the lawn. Awesome! ! !

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Jodie Hardy 18 August 2013

That's a lot of love :) lovely short breezy poem. X

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Ken E Hall 18 July 2013

Reflections of love mirrored by you leaves the reader with thoughts of love beautiful Heather...regards

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Debanjan Dhar 18 July 2013

It takes a lot of love :) Beautiful

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 15 July 2013

Deep short poem, with a beautiful rhyme. Siya_! !

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Khairul Ahsan 14 July 2013

Excellent! Short and simple, yet so deep! Morning till evening...only thought of you, and at last, caught a glimpse when looked at myself in the mirror. Brilliant idea of engulfing love!

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R.j. Wynn 08 July 2013

A beautiful heart. You saw all at once.

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David Wood 08 July 2013

This rhymed and flowed beautifully. A lovely write, thanks.

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Yasmin Khan 08 July 2013

From dawn to dusk the mind is occupied with only one thought of the beloved...an emotional write.

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Poetheart Morgan 07 July 2013

A bit of solitude and longing. Brief but deeper! I loved it! ! ! !

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Aldrich Suarez 07 July 2013

wew... you really did a very good poem... it looks like a you're guessing someone :))

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