Wonderful is not so much
The mausoleum's chisel cut beauty
As the beauty of the love
Arrested in its architecture-
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I recollect Pearl Of Love, a short story by Oscar Wild. It started with love of Mumtz Mahal, gradually it was changed in love of art, for us it's a symbol of love, a work of art. You have written a nice poem on it. I visited this wonderful tomb on my twentieth birthday.
Hallucinating but still real. There's in it no beauty That's not surpassed in beauty By beautiful carved adage Till earth wears out love like theirs Suffuses this world wonder sarcophagus...fine piece of poem
Beauty of love arrested in architecture-an elegant meaningful write.Love it.
It is a beautiful poem about a beautiful place. Well captured. Thanks.
Fairer than the sky, akin to third eye Visitors' mind illumine with cosmic bliss Very attractive description of Taj Mahal. Thanks for sharing
A wonderful poem carved in fine words, which attracts the beauty of Taj Mahal in its poetic verses. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing.
Fairer than the sky, akin to third eye Visitors' mind illumine with cosmic bliss As night snuffs asleep. What's bricked up looking glass Dawn sunpolishes Till Jamuna's surface looks back....... touching expression. Beautifully painted on Taj Mahal. Thanks for sharing.
nice words have composed- There's in it no beauty That's not surpassed in beauty By beautiful carved adage Till earth wears out love like theirs really superb thinking 10++
A vivid depiction of the wonderful attributes of one of the Wonders Of The World, Taj Mahal. Elegantly crafted write with compelling imagery.10
An amazing Ode to Taj Mahal which is known as the token of eternal love between Mughal Emperor Shah Jahan and Mumtaz Mahal, his wife. Thanks a lot, Sir.
Fairer than the sky, akin to third eye Visitors' mind illumine with cosmic bliss As night snuffs asleep. What's bricked up looking glass Dawn sunpolishes Till Jamuna's surface looks back: Beautiful.10
Hallucinating but still real. There's in it no beauty That's not surpassed in beauty By beautiful carved adage Till earth wears out love like theirs Suffuses this world wonder sarcophagus. - - - - - - It is wonderful to hear such beautiful words about TajMahal. Taj Mahal is the ivory white Mausoleum built by Moghul emperor SahaJahan to house the tomb of his beloved wife Mumtaz.Mahal.It is famous for its beautiful architecture and as a symbol of love , It attracts lovers and married couples as well as common tourists worlwide.
What a beautiful poem about Taj Mahal. Makes me want to visit it soon.
Fairer than the sky, akin to third eye Visitors' mind illumine with cosmic bliss... A beautiful place indeed. Thanks for sharing.
You had us standing in front of the Taj Mahal and I thank you for putting me there emotionally because it will never be physically.
The Taj at Agra in India is a monument that speaks volumes about the hapless thousands who toiled and perished in the process and it stands out as an image of hypocritical dimensions far fetched from the real angles of love between an emperor and his wife. The poem points finger at the evidences of many disastrous acts of human folly.
Wonderful is not so much The mausoleum's chisel cut beauty As the beauty of the love Arrested in its architecture- Beautiful insight...
Being an Indian..I am proud of this poem...and I am really thankful for expressing it so beautifully...Cheers
'Visitors' mind illumine with cosmic bliss" Wow!