A Glimpse Of Laoag: The Sunshine City Of The Philippines Comments

This is a fantastic poem! As someone who has travelled to SE Asia on numerous occasions I will acclaim you sum up this location flawlessly and beautifully!

p2 reminds of expressive thought imbued into 'Leaves Of Grass', by Wilt Whitman. Poets from time to time will return to reread a masterpiece, a poem which captures images in nature which delights calls to our souls.

p1Poetry and the love of Poetry is a personal subjective pleasure, for me this is a masterpiece of love for place, a city of origin, that siren calls to the soul, to the core of poetic personality. The beauty of nature within the first lines extending through the poem,

This is better then any tourist agencies sales pitch. Fantastic stuff Rose Marie, Im so glad this was shared! . I now want to go to the Philippines!

You have sold me on your city, now I want to visit! . The love of your home city shines through perfectly in this epic tribute, Laoag comes alive with vivid descriptions that it seems majestic and magical. If you cannot love your home then what can you love.

What an elaborate wonderful and beautifully descriptive write on your hometown Rose..very much inspiring...appreciate this your work whole heartedly...stay blessed always

You are a tribute to your city Rose Marie Juan-austin!

#4 combines purity mind inspiring light/ into a continuous tapestry of beautified glorious light honouring beauty perceived in creation

at the shrine of their altar may be a daisy buttercup rose or exquisite rare orchard/ it is sentiment in gift given sincere which matters immortalizes moments/ all gift creation dedication woven sung in appreciation/

#2 into all colours spectrums of the rainbow/ seen and unseen in human light spectrums/ an artist in appreciation adoration may comment on inspired music paintings sculpture words of another artist/ our tribute

#1 there is a discordant disconnect/ in the mind of an artist musician author poet/ who desires tries to best beat originality talent of other artists/ true artists aspire in love appreciation to capture light share emotive sung visions/ within glorious radiant white light splitting

p2 imbued with perceptive appreciation insight intensity/ mystic cultural woven in past present soul breathing fibres/ lives times passions experiences love manifests/ in sacred glorious adoration for homeland memories written into our souls

p1 in chemistry depths within an artistic soul, upon rare chance occasions, exquisite words may stir rise from ephemeral subconscious depths/ inspired intense love for a place time deep woven into the heart/ may stir memories to fusion in creation/ a masterpiece

Oh, Such heart and feel so beautifully painted into your imagery! .. Ever so many Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Ohh, Girl you had me hanging onto every word! .. Simply Magnificent! ..

A great tribute to your lovely city Laoag.Your poem takes me along around the city with its gentle wind.Such a beautiful poem, thanks for sharing!

Craftsmanship that is genuinr and unique

It's, of course, a marvelous and sincere tribute to your home city

TRULY LAST: And this Great Gorgeous Tribute, created full of Love and Passion, this Beauty goes to MyFavourites.

(D) we as readers can feel the deep love and pride the great Poetess has for her beautiful tropical homeland, and this reader knows too why she left her lovely homeland in the tropics. A great and fantastic Tribute, my dear friend. TOP Marks!