Thursday, January 12, 2006

A Glimpse Beyond The Mist Comments

Rating: 5.0

with closed eyes...
sunlight and shadows flicker over the eyelids
reminiscing days way back when, as mind drifts
mists of cold morning by dawn's pale light
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Elya Thorn 12 January 2006

I can see why you have won with this poem, it's one of the best I have read in such a long time! I have read it out loud (as I love to read poems :)) and it has such a beautiful resonance, such a beautiful melody, the words are so well put together, like a perfect puzzle, the imagery of the poem is strangely beautiful, I love the comparisons between dusk, sky and life, the past and the future and the present, the love we all seek... It is combined into one amazing poem, sad and melancholic seem to me, but also it talks about a glimpse about the things that could be... that could happen... On a scale of 1 to 10 this poem, deserves an 11, but I'll vote here for 10, (there is no 11) . You are a great artist!

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