Saturday, July 21, 2007

A Glimpse... Comments

Rating: 5.0

The old woman waited,
standing on the sidwalk
watching the round-about
She seems frail,
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David Harris 01 October 2007

Lee the unconditional love for your mother pours across the page. The imagery of this poem is supreme. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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I see that pieces expressing unconditional love with the most serene of pens and allowing your reader a glimpse into your rather lovely nature is something of a trademark of yours. Simply divine. t x

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Marci Made 23 July 2007

This is so beautiful and over the top full of love for your Mom as you retell us the story in your poem....Loosing our Parents, especially when we're young makes it hard when we're older to have no where to turn for only the things they can provide. But I wonder if it is more difficult to be older and watch them as they fail each day....I pray your Mom is not suffering and that you feel the love that NO ONE but a MOM feels for their child...........marci.xo

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Roger Bowman 22 July 2007

A glimpse of love a glimpse of you and your mother a light in you soul to guide you through difficult times. Exquisite writin. Lots of love Lee Roger

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