Saturday, July 22, 2006

A Glimmer Of A Dull Flower Comments

Rating: 5.0

She blooms secretly in an unflappable graveyard.
And who sympathizes for the immature except a grave-digger?
She dreams of a soft heart butterfly and stagnates with the dead souls.
Who understands her soft spot, language and the soggy heart?
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Alison Cassidy 01 September 2006

Nimal, This is an exceptional poem in which your quirky turn of phrase combines with the 'flower' of your compassion to produce a message of warmth and wisdom. Thank you. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Preeti - is here! 23 August 2006

I love how you designed this poem, its a shining diamond and for a very good cause! Preets

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Duncan Wyllie 27 July 2006

I agree, the sooner they can uphold peace the better, we must pray for peace Love duncan X

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Sandra Fowler 22 July 2006

A fascinating drama written in your usual unique style., I applaud your dedication. Warm regards.Sandra

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Emma Johnson 22 July 2006

A brilliant piece, one of your best. Susie.

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Duncan Wyllie 22 July 2006

Thankyou for this Nimal, so creative by design, a clever write Love duncan X

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