A Gleaming Smile Comments

This is a beautiful short poem. Wonderfully written great work!

A very Interesting Saro! (Paaro from Devdas?) The first Para is so beautiful, a lovely dedication.

(((a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with...afzal shauq))) hope you ever read my this famous say..but here you too smiles in different but charming way and I agree with you words sure.. like this stanza very much To whomever she believes in, To whatever she devotes truly, She is a being of true light, She is a star of the night! let me give you...10++++++++++ points to show you are writing well

she is the darling of your heart, the theme of this poem and the heroine that makes you smile..grace

Will you please introduce me to her? ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I gave you an 8

waa line of yours soaked in love and care.......a great gift for your saro.....sebastine......10 for sure....

a sweet write to your Saro...would definitely bring a smile on her face...pleasing poem, Winnie...10