A Glad Vision Comments

Appreciated the gladness expressed in the last line

Thou Thou art, Thou art the Creator of all. My cells and buds and waves and all. Thou art, Thou art, Thou art in them all. A handful of dust this body though Resides in and beams in, Gracious Thou. beautiful simply beautiful poem my dear Parmeswaram. tony

A piece of work of great value and substance! I would like to quote the last line of your poem that I liked most: I am glad, I'm glad, glad like a candle plume.....Extremely well penned dear poet! I vote this beautiful piece of work with a 10

Moment of revelation! ! Nice piece of work.

Dazzled, blinked and stunned, I see Then 'I' melt into 'WE' as waves in sea- -merging of self with the Great Creator and his creations, the blissful moment when ego vanishes -nice portrayal of the vision.

a well written poem good read

Really nice poem, you're very talented. Thanks for sharing your work with us

An exalted moment of heightened vision, a moment of fusion of our fragile self with the Infinite Self, a moment of pure bliss, of unbounded joy! ! A Great experience, poetically portrayed! !

I like the way this poem flows. Perhaps you should put a comma after the first ''Thou art''. I forget commas too, but I think that thay are important when the poem is read...There is definately a unique vibe to this poem.

wow! ! ! ! ! ! really divine........ nice rhymes....... an apt title....

Then, 'I' melt into 'WE' as waves in Sea. depicts our unity with God so perfectly. This poem really takes my breath away!

benumbed senses sensuous-you have a way with words

An insightful poem, inspired indeed! Depicts the awesome wonder of God.; D

Nice perspective of revelations of GOD and all