Wednesday, February 10, 2010

A Given Day. Comments

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A dear old Cornish friend would often say
When looking at a blue-topped winter sky
And pointing out the view - - 'A given day
This be - - a given day for we to try
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Fay Slimm
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Ellen Ni Bheachain 30 April 2020

Lovely and nicely put.

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Ron Flowers 22 February 2010

I love this inspirational poem. Ron

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Sandra Fowler 12 February 2010

I love the warmth and inspiration of this one. A beautiful write to be reading on a very lowering morning in West Virginia. Touched by your gift, as always. Your friend from afar, Sandra

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Ian Bowen 10 February 2010

Fay, liked the 'local dialect' in your poem. Well written. Regards, Ian

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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