Wednesday, April 18, 2007

A Girly Tale Comments

Rating: 5.0

I sat in a cafe an ate a cake I knew I had too
because I was getting as thin as a rake.
'As thin as a rake' my Mother said if you don't
eat more you will soon be dead; so I sat an
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Lisa Wilkinson 26 June 2008

A great girly tale this is Sylvie! Very amusing and Im sure this is apt for some people. Thanks for sharing, Lisa

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Ernestine Northover 18 April 2007

Gee, what a complicated life one leads. As usual your great storytelling is on top form. Woven with such flair. Love Ernestine XXX

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Duncan Wyllie 18 April 2007

A thought-provoking story/poem that tells of those complicated days when we were wild and free and then had to face the consequences Ah well, all the best Sis Hope things are rosy for ya now Love duncan X

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Sandra Fowler 18 April 2007

Excellent write, Sylvia. A very strong message delivered here. You are a truly gifted story teller. I look forward to the next one. Love, Sandra

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Scarlett Treat 18 April 2007

Poor sad little gal...hurt at home, hurt by the guy...no where to turn, little skinny gal, sick and alone. What a sad, sad story, and more true than ever. It always seems to be the girls who bear the burden. Good story Rosie.

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