Friday, February 19, 2010

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! A Girl With Curls...! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Comments

Rating: 5.0

I don’t like my curly hair.
Everyday I say a prayer.

God, please make my hair straight.
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Mamta Agarwal
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Sandra Fowler 07 March 2010

Enchanting word portrait. I am sure God loves Anika for her curly hair.10/10. Always your friend, Sandra Sandra

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Vidi Writes 01 March 2010

Its that age of children, when they have that open mind Which is ready to hear and understand Its only when grown up they get closed to outside A feeling that.. now i know everything. How nice it is to be... a child at heart and mind forever We can have a closed door still an open gate... as the age goes... Nice one... simple truth.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 28 February 2010

thank god ANIKA does not have a sister with straight hair

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 28 February 2010

a beautiful poem mam....

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 28 February 2010

wow... a poem with a different message... unique... nice write

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 26 February 2010

Rhythm, rhyme and spontaneity are the beauty of this poem.

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C. P. Sharma 21 February 2010

Natural rhythm and flow with heartfelt affection for the grand daughter. An effortless poetry, I enjoyed reading it. CP

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Kesav Easwaran 21 February 2010

A beautiful page from life very beautifully brought out...Anika, HE loves you...HE loves you the way you look in your curly hair....10

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