A Girl With Blue Green Hair Comments

The poem reflects the state of your heart.An african boy loves you.

Mary, almost everything is very religious, That is not to say that there is anything wrong with that, But, 'the blue green hair ' is just a little bit more special.

A very nice story here Mary, I loved the theme flowing all the way through, with the girl and the blue-green hair at the start and again at the end, which finished it really well. I wrote a poem about a church called 'The Call from on High' which you may enjoy, it's quite humourous. Thanks for posting this I enjoyed reading it. Love Ernestine XXX