A Girl With A Goal! ! ! Comments

very descriptive poem.methodically explained. enjoyed reading voted10 surya

very descriptive poem.methodically explained. enjoyed reading voted10 surya

ohh! ! very sweet poem! ! nyc way of expressing ur self!

may she would touch the pinnacles........victory is waiting for her...... 'to err is human' 'after clouds come fair weather' 10+ for this vivid expression.

oh! this is so very nice poem, i like it very much well done poet luwi

Over her shoulder she looks back at the past...ahead she smiles knowing the future holds the key to unlock the pain and set her free.....her past paved in mistakes that many have made...laid the stones that she once walked upon hoping that freedom from life, was escape with no comebacks.....in reflection she stands and looks into the waters...the image is not one she knows....and as if stolen...the past dissolves as she climbs upon the waves and sails into the future where she meets her goals.......happiness now her own.