Friday, May 2, 2008

A Girl With A Broken Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

once upon a time,
I was wandering in a beautiful garden
I saw a pretty girl sitting on the grass
she looked torn deep inside,
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Kuji Soliman 13 September 2009

This poem is exellent, i loved it! you have a way of touching people through poetry

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Ashraful Musaddeq 08 September 2008

'a little girl with a broken heart nothing I can do to comfort her I told myself why don't I talk to her? I asked her why all this tears? ' Mankind should be the essence of writing.10+.

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Anong All 31 July 2008

Nice poem, sounds giving :)

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Marilyn Lott 02 May 2008

I hope the girl is in a sunny, beautiful place and has a good life. Sweet poem that will have a happy ending! A '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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