Tuesday, July 15, 2008

A Girl To Remember Comments

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Whether she wants it or not,
in this life or the next,
she holds my heart,
and all it connects,
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Brandon Chiles
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Rajiv Kumar Aukhojee 15 July 2008

nice poem love with your heart think with brain but do not act insane good attempt Brandon cheers

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Kyle Shield Laster 15 July 2008

'whether she wants it or not...she holds my heart...' this poem is very possessive. amazingly written.

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Brandon Chiles

Brandon Chiles

Lima, Ohio
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