Thursday, May 12, 2011

A Girl So Beautiful Comments

Rating: 4.2

a girl so beautiful and kind ended her life
in just one swip
no one new her pain inside
so thay thought she was fine how can a girl so beautiful
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danyelle tedrow
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Romeo Della Valle 15 April 2012

A sad but a well penned and powerful write that clearly shows your emotion and also your talent! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-NYC

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Vipins Puthooran 09 January 2012

Powerful penning though there's sad// top marks

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Crimson Love 21 October 2011

a very deep and meaningful poem, I truly enjoyed it, very sad though, but I love sad poetry, truly magnificent. :)

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Ebi Robert 13 September 2011

The poem is powerful. It does carry a lot of Messages in a poetry's voice

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no it wasnt that she died of beauty it was she k*ill*d her self be cuz she was being bulled

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This was really sad and touching.No one see one's pain till it's to late.

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lost soul 12 May 2011

she was just too beautiful she died of beauty. nice concise poem

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