Monday, December 8, 2008

A Girl's Questionnaire To God Comments

Rating: 2.4

I hope that it is mist, but they say mist clears,
I hope it is smoke, but they say it fades of
I hope its it is a drug, but they say it wears off
I hope its night, but they say a day always succeds it
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jathin aka jesuzz
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Indira Renganathan 22 April 2009

True to your heart...quite an audacious poem...meaningful flow of words, the style, ...very catchy and interesting...congratulations

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Autumn Stoddard 22 December 2008

How true this is! I believe these have been asked many times before. And to have put this into words, quite remarkable. Although I am not one to talk, considering my grammatical errors, I do belive there are a few place that could use editing.

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