Saturday, July 4, 2009

A Girl's Love Comments

Rating: 3.6

My heart beats faster when Im with you
My mind is always on you
You are the only thing i think about
Im always caught up with your smile then to listen to you
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Broken heart emo
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Mahlubandile Phillips 02 August 2023

I'm so relating right now especially when their eyes meet yours

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Amitava Sur 21 July 2014

The expression of a broken heart was expressed so clearly and emotionally the it touched my heart. Felt intensely

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Indranil Bhaduri 06 August 2012

Feelings of not getting your love, short and well written.

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Michael Silver 13 July 2012

Read some of my poems sometime. This was well written.

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Marvin Brato 26 May 2012

Many can relate, seems the majority!

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so, you have not changed for the past three year, still in the denial mode! so bad and so sad! !

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Rajendran Muthiah 13 May 2012

The rose loves the bee that flies towards the jasmine. The broken heart's emotions are told beautifully. Best wishes to the most popular poet.

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Kenebo Rajkumar 11 May 2012

true love never die, the unique day will come and honor your love.....

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 04 March 2012

good poem....good sad poem... hm... everything will be ok in the end... if it isn`t ok... it isn`t the end

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Wahab Abdul 29 February 2012

Smartly well described and well scripted, fully thoughtful and engrossing, I like it.

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Tracey Pierce 18 February 2012

I like this poem, I understand exactly how this person feels.. But then 'love' can also be defined in being happy for a person who is happy in love, even if that happiness is not found in you.. Complicated! : P

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Sahmyah Kelley 09 February 2012

love is blind and boys are stupied

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Himanshu Sanghani 12 January 2012

It was written somewhere don't remember where but it stayed in my mind: Don't fall in love, rise in love.

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*BleedingHeart* *Arielle* 22 November 2011

Thais was so good that i dont know what to say i know how u feel hun..its hard when the guy i love doesnt even care to love u back i just went through this with a guy and i still love him but he doesnt care and all i can say to u is be careful dotn give ur heart just to anybody becareful who u give it to

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Makenzi Betts 28 September 2011

woow.... so sweet: -p

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Habib Noori 15 September 2011

love ur poems sweety got some emotion on em: P check mine out wen u get time :)

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Zubyre Parvez 17 July 2011

Good use of rhythm!

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lost soul 19 June 2011

To the one who writes so well, you willl find others, more deserving of your love.

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Akram Saqib 21 April 2011

depiction is great in the poem

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Saadat Tahir 31 December 2010

well well.... it isnt the first time nor the last......but the one n the centre o da storm....its blood every where... i so agree with.... Konstantin Filipov (7/15/2010 6: 24: 00 PM) the emotion of love is incredible, but the feeling of loving and not being loved is awful. nice lines cheers

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