Sunday, November 8, 2009

A Girl's Life Comments

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a girl's life.....
before birth, , ,
mumma will you accept me, as nobody want me to live
ma will you fight for me, will you make me live
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Jazib Kamalvi 29 October 2017

A nice poetic imagination, sim. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Shelly Shelly 10 November 2009

my world rounds around u, , , do you care a bit for me, will you make me meet your frndz as i introduce you with me frndz, the poem reminds me of all ladies around me...how they believe still their expectations can't be fulfilled.. a tremendous effort to strengthen the voice of a lady to all the men important in her life around her.. 10++ nice work

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Rakesh Bedi 08 November 2009

i think it to be an over projection of a side of a woman...we cant, at present, confine a woman in these self-created boundaries of ones mind. She has takes an unexplored flight on her own and it seems that she is enjoying it with full sensitivity n sensibly, too...

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Outstanding poem....! I'm speechless after this bitter truth so well furnished in this poems...gr8 work....

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