Friday, March 12, 2010

A Girl Named Sudoku Comments

Rating: 5.0

she told me a few variables then
kept nine secrets for herself

she asked me for three words
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nathan martin
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Daniel Brick 18 April 2014

WOW! I love the way you fuse images to create extended figures of speech. The opening lines alone make a capsule character sketch and suggest depths to Sudoku's personality which make her almost frightening. No, it's not almost, she is frightening to those who might try to manipulate her. She strikes as the kind of person who needs constant stimulation from those she's with, or she'll split. She wouldn't be willing to patiently wade through the Getting to Know You stage. Whooosh - she's gone, and whether you're relieved or bummed says a lot about you.

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April Kiessling 28 May 2010

That's so clever! I laughed out load-and it took me toward the end to figure it out.

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John Mccullagh 12 March 2010

Poor guy. It sounds like she did a number on you.

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