Tuesday, September 4, 2018

A Girl Named Sandy Comments

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A girl named Sandy lost her candy
While playing with her favourite rag doll,
She went downstairs and took a deep breath
And started to cry in the hall.
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Projeeta Ghosh Biswas
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Dr Antony Theodore 20 September 2018

She slips her hand inside her sac for a tissue, She found nothing but the candy in the pouch. Your imagination is soooo great dear poetess.. marvellous. and the final picture adds to it all.. thank u for your mind and the power of imagination. tony

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Naila Rais 04 September 2018

Your poems are really amazing...10 keep it up. Naila

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Projeeta Ghosh Biswas 04 September 2018

I am a 12 year old who loves to write poems. I hope you like this one! It's quite silly though hahaha!

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