a girl named hate
stood at heavens gate
just wishing to be let in
she breathed out sin
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Very imaginiative and scary. There are lots of girls that can relate to this I'm sure.
This is an interesting thought provoking piece of poetry! Great rhyme scheme and imagery. Great job with much truth weaved throughout...........thanx for sharing! ! =Shelley=
shunNed..... I Love this 'hate-girl' poem! maybe i shall meet her when i die! ? are you alive? still on PH? to MyPoemList. bri :)