Though you left me apart.....
Though you never think about me anymore......
Though you don't want me anymore.....
Though you have new friends who replace me.....
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Good I could say! but next time add some rythmic word fill it not just with emotion but also with passion. well I give it 'Average' sorry 5/10
Nice poem, A contemporary importance is there, thanks for sharing,10+
is this about a friend u lost three years back? ? ?