A Girl Like Me Comments

......self-indulgent, badly written rubbish!

A sad poem from one so young with unrequited love a very good subject you can feel....when Mr Right comes get ready with the magic carpet....... regards

A grl like u is one of a kind, there will always b someone that actualy does care for u. Keep on keep'n on home grl, Hippy Sav

Now don't say that. I thought your structure was just fine. Structure makes a poem easy to read. That's what your poem was. I enjoyed reading it so much that I actually wanted to read more. Your message was clear and sincere. I could feel the heartbreak. Just a wonderful writing. GW62

young lady. some lucky fella woudl be just lucky to have you as his bride.

deep very good poem i like it alot

there is a man out there waiting for you to peice you back together. I like your last stanza. good job. *Purkey Girl*

i agree with barbara... in time, all that pieces will settle into their fitting places. keep writing keep pouring it out people can relate to you people care God bless

a girl like you is you mother or you sister

I like the last line, and when I started to post my poems, everyone tried to tell me that it was written wrong. Poetry today tells about our lives, and what we are going, or have gone through. This is a very well written piece and says so much about why others don't listen when we talk. Thank you for sharing, but I believe that there is someone out there for a girl like you. Love & hugs, Barbara

if you know how much you wanted to die, you would not be broken all over the place, , so, before you get sad, read frank stanford, then rethink all your poems, cause they just aint sad. maybe that is what is dragging into the open fire, because you must beware of the passenger, you must DO DAMAGE TO the BRAIN WHILE RAISING A FLOWER OF FIRE, nice try except to the fact there is something wrong, but i am not bob dyland, just a funkey uselss american

A very moving poem, it's hard to believe in love when you feel like jagged glass inside.

so expressive of the real feelings of yearning....tnx 4 sharing