Saturday, May 30, 2009

A Girl In The Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

As the rain drops my heart melts,
as they say a beauty, i say what a beauty!
the dropp travels through the face,
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vamsi krishna
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Mona Martinez 08 June 2009

that was very lovely.

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this is nice. i like it a lot.......

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Kesav Easwaran 03 June 2009

you bring in, a girl nicely inside a rain dropp in your poem Aryan...imaginative piece...good work...10

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Alyssa Marquardt 30 May 2009

nice images and emotions

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Joseph Poewhit 30 May 2009

Paints a beautiful picture

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Keshav Prasad 30 May 2009

nice write.....'takes a trip to heaven' i like it....

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Ashraful Musaddeq 30 May 2009

Amazing composition 10

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