Tuesday, June 16, 2009

A Girl I Know Comments

Rating: 5.0

There is a girl who I know and she’s not always what she seems,
She wears a smile on her face each day although inside there’s only screams.
To her friends and her family she always makes a good impression,
But really it’s all an act she constantly puts on, just to hide her depression.
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Brooke Luchich
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Tori Fleck 06 September 2009

Oh mygosh... this poem totally describes me. This is VERY well written. Keep it up :) I am giving this poem a 10! :)

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Megan Ewing 16 July 2009

This very good! I know that girl too, it's me. For all the people who ever felt that way they will relate to this poem and for everyone else they will begin to understand what it feels like.

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Hailey Agnew 16 July 2009

wow i love this poem i understood every word i've been the girl, and i know how it feels. everyone will probably experience it at one point in their life

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Chitra - 15 July 2009

an eyeopener write on foes both external and internal..well written

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sky dreams 17 June 2009

no matter how bad your enemies seem to be.. sometimes the worst possible enemy you can have is yourself and you dont even know it.... great write very truthful

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The bigest enemies we meet in our life are those who envy us and just live to distroy us by stealing everything we manage to dig out with our bare hands... Never feel worthless - know your strength and use it wisely, never showing off... Nice write...Thank you for sharing...

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Brooke Luchich

Brooke Luchich

Darwin, NT
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