A girl along the road
I saw with tearful eyes
There all she did was cry
Coz' to her love she said goodbye
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Very sad.. who might this girl be? L.O.L. anyway.. very narrative and the flow of the poem is captivating.. The words used were strong and stern.. Keep writing with such good concepts..
A great narrative poem...I just wonder if the one who saw this girl along the road turned back to the lass and tried to comfort her and listen to what she has to say...Nice poem, keep writing!