Monday, August 3, 2009

A Girl Along The Road Comments

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A girl along the road
I saw with tearful eyes
There all she did was cry
Coz' to her love she said goodbye
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Lorena Lalen Cruz
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Danzen D. 12 September 2009

A great narrative poem...I just wonder if the one who saw this girl along the road turned back to the lass and tried to comfort her and listen to what she has to say...Nice poem, keep writing!

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Julia Pascual 05 August 2009

nice poem...................

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Nashy Lamen 03 August 2009

Very sad.. who might this girl be? L.O.L. anyway.. very narrative and the flow of the poem is captivating.. The words used were strong and stern.. Keep writing with such good concepts..

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