A Girl Comments

Good and small words used perfectly, nice creation like a innocent girl`s smile, the God lnows Her very well, Nice 10+

: ( That was so sad. Are these really your feelings, or are they written about someone else? If it is about you, you are definitely more than you say you are, cuz you are a very good writer. I wrote a similar poem called 'she could have been the best... this world's ever seen' about a girl I knew who was a lot like the girl you described. I hope things start looking up.