Monday, January 25, 2010

A Girl Comments

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i gave my heart to a girl
to whom i loved like a pearl
she thought that i was a flirt
and blew my heart like a patch of dirt
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charanpreet singh bajaj
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Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee 25 January 2010

Nice idea. But there are a few grammatical errors. Might be unintentional and a slip of pen. go on writing... bravo I want ur comments on my two poems on Haiti and a few poems on love.... Waiting for sharing views with u. Ratan bhattacharjee

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Farooq Hussain 25 January 2010

Great Poem if u get time pl. go through my poems also

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