A Girl Comments

It is an irony to think that love ends in sadness in most of the occasions. The theme of the poem is love and it is a good and awesome poem as per my vision and knowledge.

I 'm sure that this is the most suitable one for healing the breach between the star-crosses lovers! I love it!

A sad poem….why the girl is so…well poet wanted like that. Ten+ Ms. Nivedita. UK Please read my Why Hack My She [in elite 500] or others. niv

A beautiful heart-to-heart talk with us, your fellow poets, and that's amazingly penned :) 10ner for you!

I, as if, walked thru a very familiar way....Thnx for sharing...10+...Brishti Mazumdar

joyous moments shared in the clear sky...gone gray, the clouds vanquish, then you're in mid air, then eventually you'll fall... there's nothing to grasp to help you back up, so you can do nothing till you hit the ground...it hurt's excrutiatingly...but you must then pull it together, molding yourself to be stronger.... nothing's planned to fail...but it happens... nice poem raj..... thanks for sharing. best wishes from me to you dear, thanks for everything.

oh raj... that is so sad.... i'm sorry for your pain, you really don't deserve this... well, from every bad experience there is indeed a lesson learned... take that lesson, and make progress in the future friend.... +10 from me... thanks for sharing