Wednesday, January 28, 2009

A Girl Comments

Rating: 4.8

Once there was a girl
Who simply had a dream For you to love her. But you loved me

She wanted you..You wanted me...or so you said.I said goodbye
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Trinidad Villafranca
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Daryl Cheng 15 August 2009

good work. this poem is heart-wrenching and really touching. shows how some times some people do not treasure what is before them. really nice poem.

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Aarif Ameen 03 May 2009

good work a girl 10+ love you take care

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Gi Galen 01 May 2009

Attractive … rhythmic, it would turn out a good song.../10

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