Wednesday, January 16, 2008

A Girl Comments

Rating: 4.5

This is a poem
about a girl; to sad to give a f***
she tries finding it,
but she's lost all of her luck...
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Sara Amidon
COMMENTS
Raindreamer Hippy 25 May 2008

hey, I realy like that poem. IT's very emotional but its true. Nice write!

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Coreena Dejesus 10 March 2008

Thanks for sharing your poem i can feel the emotion in it. Hugz! ! CC

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Jerrica Juarez 03 March 2008

I really enjoyed reading ur poem.....it is very emotional and i can tell it came from the heart =)

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Very powerful, intensely sad poem. Thank you for posting this. I enjoyed the read. L&T

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Meggie Gultiano 23 January 2008

Sara, i have a goose bump reading this. i know you will go so far with your talent.Please write more, you've got the talent, you're oozing with loads of talent! you can express very well..i am really proud of you, my dear..This is a wonderful job of yours..Bravo! Love, Meggie

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Anita Blake 22 January 2008

real powerful write i really like! great job! !

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Shalia Robinson 21 January 2008

gurl this is a deep poem. WOW! ! ! you are an excellent writer. WOWWWWWWW! ! ! ! Love it.

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Evaughn Gray 16 January 2008

very good poem i love it.. your a good writer..there' something we have in common already..lol Hazel eyes..

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