A Gift. Comments

Nice poem. Sometimes people let love grow into obsession and end up destroying what they cared about.

Fake love! With decietful eyes. Thanks for sharing.

lawful treasure, known pleasure. you are mine. my possession, shameless slipping away. all these words which i collected from your poem reveals your own assessment of the poem. false love and delusion. thank you for your thoughts.. it made me think of love and possession and selfishness and naturally about pure love. thank you dear poetess.

Original and brilliant expression of the arrogance and control of a man who doesn't have a soul but brutally looks on his wife as his property!

i'm getting too hot reading this. i'll have to return. bri :)