Thursday, May 17, 2012

A Gift Comments

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He sat in a chair with wheels,
they became his legs.
I didn't feel sorry for him, he didn't want me too,
his pain was agonizing, I saw it shut out of his eyes,
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Kasia Fedyk
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Amitava Sur 13 March 2014

I could feel your intense love what does not need to speak...... loved your detailing

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 29 July 2013

Wow! ! what a poem, I love poems about real life experiences coz they touch the heart of the reader. With this excellently written poem, you took me there with you... great imagery too. Siya_! !

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Kasia Fedyk 17 May 2012

This poem for some reason truly gave me something, something I am feeling at this moment and through out the whole poem I wrote, I found myself in this place and time with those people and felt their every emotion when I wrote this as if I was there communicating through them to you. I can only hope you will feel it too, I still have chills. Love and Light.

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