Tuesday, November 15, 2011

A Gift Comments

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Here I am standing with a gift
This was after lot of thoughts
A gift conceived from my heart
Lot of delusion went in mind
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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 25 November 2011

Sweet poem, i like it.... 'there were two doves, siting on a tree, singing beautifully, now there's one dove there, where two doves were sharing their joy, ...'

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Sajna Kailas 20 November 2011

wow, good poem! keep that gift my friend you will definitely get a chance to give it to your beloved! best wishes!

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Dave Walker 15 November 2011

A good poem. Like it. A good write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, Indian Brave.

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