Tuesday, June 23, 2009

A Gift Comments

Rating: 4.6

In just one, whole, single day
What can one possibly say
Our world in times such as thus
When we together again can be us
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Deborah Cromer
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Dr.subhendu Kar 02 August 2012

togetherness etches gold in history heart soars high melding int blue journey genuflects to tune times earth knows songs of love being engrossed, wonderful write yet ingenious,10++++, thanks for sharing

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 August 2009

We must only love one another Pray up towards our Holy Mother Inside a moment as this one it is gift from HIM and we should not fail him... it is wonderfyl and fertile idea so sure to be impacted in our mind.. lovely presentation....10 read mine go back....o, mother...o.lord...prayer

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Omar Ibrahim 26 August 2009

very good.........i like your poetry very much so please dont stop writing...

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Rajaram Ramachandran 20 August 2009

Life is God's gift, which should be utilized for the good of all. Well composed.

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Andrew Blakemore 01 August 2009

A really beautiful love poem Deborah, you are a very talanted poet. Best wishes, Andrew

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Siddharth Singh 28 July 2009

How enchanting can a gift of love be? Lovely write.

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Nikunj Sharma 13 July 2009

I think I read it before as well and left my humble comments, which got removed somehow. No matter how many times I read this piece and hw many times the comments evaporate, the greatness of the poem stays

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Nikunj Sharma 07 July 2009

each word is worth a million bucks....so calculate the wealth that u have with you...amazing poetess u are.....

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Yelena M. 04 July 2009

A touching poem of a spiritual force.Your poetic style is just superb, thanks for sharing :) Best wishes. A.

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Anjali Sinha 04 July 2009

wowwwwwww pearls your droppppppppp! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! anjali

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Nikunj Sharma 02 July 2009

A decision that only you can make Discover now all that is good Become who you are and be what you should You will reach the point then you will know How much his love has made me grow Your words attract and your poems are magnetic.... great msg in them...pls read my poems called MY DREAM, HOLD A MIRROR and CAN I?

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Nikunj Sharma 02 July 2009

A decision that only you can make Discover now all that is good Become who you are and be what you should You will reach the point then you will know How much his love has made me grow Your words attract and your poems are magnetic.... great msg in them...pls read my poems called MY DREAM, HOLD A MIRROR and CAN I?

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Tom Bulfin 29 June 2009

A poem full of joy and hope.

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Wonderful poem about faith.you should open a facebook account and add some of your poems as a link.A ten.

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Twilight Dreamer 29 June 2009

This is truly so beautiful. The gifts we are givne we should be thankful, grateful and smile with great admiration. Very enjoyable.

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Alex Lewis 24 June 2009

The theme and rhyming were excellent.10+

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Eyan Desir 23 June 2009

Hmmm this poem didnt end the way I accepted but you did well top marks well written love doctor

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Deborah Cromer

Portland, Oregon
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