A Ghostly Air Comments

Enjoyed reading this. Nice work.

Of course I was attracted by the word ghost. An intriguing and truthful poem about inspiration and purpose, two very tricky and intangible subjects.

Now as I begin to read more of your work I feel a very deep soul open and sharing and so wonderful to ponder over your creation here. I really love this one.................. I gave it a ten even though I usually don't leave a point grade But this one really needs more recognition I think.... Many would love to read this. I hope to see more similar to it as I continue to read your art.......... Jim Troy

Or is it just a sense that somethings wrong That makes one write a poem or a song To answer an unasked question, fair Are you here or are you there? It's amazing how so many events spark the poetic inspiration, resulting into a beautiful poem - like this one. I really enjoyed this thought provoking piece. Wishing you the best in your writing.

Very well penned full of wisdom and depth. Your symbolism is perfect. I admired the poem. Nice write. I sincerely invite you write a comment on my poem 'False beauty.'