Saturday, September 28, 2013

A Ghost That Can't Let Go Comments

Rating: 4.8

Sleeping in daylight
too scared to sleep at night
there's voices in my head
from people who are dead
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Dave Alan Walker
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Skywee Gh 14 November 2013

wow, a fine poem that reminds me of me.thank mon.

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Kanav Justa 08 November 2013

A mysterious poem you wrote... loved it

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Noreen Carden 06 November 2013

Hello Dave A very interesting poem We all want to know what happened that night. Very enjoyable read

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Anand Brown 06 November 2013

Enjoyed this one Dave!

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Susan Lacovara 05 November 2013

I consider the spirits of those who passed as old friends, their visits, be them in dreams, familiar voices, or just a presence, felt...welcomed and not to be feared....rather embraced...listen to the whispers of your life. Is there pain attached to the departed? Well written and lingering....PEACE

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Marvin Brato 01 November 2013

Conscience always rings our mind, talking to us about the dead past!

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Heather Wilkins 16 October 2013

go ahead talk with them. they won't hurt you. they are just in another dimension a good write

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Lyn Paul 12 October 2013

Listen just once.. You may be surprised, ...Just what did happen that night?

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Daniela Cesta 10 October 2013

beautiful but have no fear of the dead death is only a change of worlds...

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Daniela Cesta 10 October 2013

all welldone dear Dave

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Bright Morn 05 October 2013

there is too much in this short peice. very good write

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Neela Nath Das 04 October 2013

An eerie atmosphere is created successfully10+++

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Valerie Dohren 01 October 2013

Ghosts of the past so often do haunt us. Good one Dave.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 01 October 2013

with every death of our beloved ones, a part of us is lost. great philosophy in this poem, Dave.

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Gajanan Mishra 30 September 2013

what is an age my dear poet? what is death? you have put so many questions here in this poem. congratulation, very fine write. please read my poems and comment. especially'Family members' and vote.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 30 September 2013

Past keeps haunting. It's better to feel dead than listen to the ghosts. Beautifully said. Thank you Dave.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 30 September 2013

Yikes a nice hallucinating poem. Kudos to yor poem, im scared of d thot of them. Do read my latest on d jealous, coments aint necesary.

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Heather Wilkins 29 September 2013

a good write Dave. I would not want to talk with them either.

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Tribhawan Kaul 29 September 2013

I died with them that night......great. This is deep.

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Patti Masterman 28 September 2013

Like this a lot. Very ingenious idea.

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