Saturday, July 12, 2008

A Ghazal - Traveller O! Comments

Rating: 3.2

Traveller O, why your feet have halted there?
Your terminus is still nowhere near.

Hear the brook that goes on singing in the woods,
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Sunil Uniyal
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Rajnish Manga 22 October 2018

Beautiful ghazal indeed. A pleasure to read.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 19 July 2008

traveller still truges the path onto the finale breath when flows by the plexus of life and living time and space yet unconquered primed cuckoo`s song still heard embarking upon the mile stone..............excellent poem by imagery., yety ingeniously lucid, 10+, thanks for sharing

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