Monday, January 7, 2019

A Ghazal- In English Comments

Rating: 5.0

The buds of wishes have grown and became flowers, now.
The fragrance of it is spreading to all parts and directions, now.

What my mind conceived and heart did not endorse
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M. Asim Nehal
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Varsha M 24 July 2021

Sir this is very touchy composition. It speaks everything one undergoes when in love but can't express. Into my favourite.

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Zoyza Da Vinka 24 July 2021

Yes Now is wow....

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Mihaela Pirjol 16 July 2019

The way each last verse ends with 'Now' is just great! It shows the procession, the perpetual continuity, the ever-changing moments of life, and we, as humans being changed by them. A great poem!

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Suzon Albert 21 January 2019

The stroke of my pen produced a poetry Like the Taj Mahal, a symbol of love, now. Superb...

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T Rajan Evol 07 January 2019

Classic poem in the form of a wonderful Ghazal.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 07 January 2019

The moods of the mind as the years rolled nicely portrayed in the poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 January 2019

Buds of best wishes have bloomed as flowers and these have motivated mind. Inner voice of conscience has understood life's mood and aim. A nice poem is excellently penned is brilliant poem.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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