A Ghazal - He And We Comments

2. about the 'poem'. is it worth being called so? or even a ghazal?

This poem was selected poem of the dat (pod) modern on 22 October 2019 and again tioday. As if there are no poems worth the name! I have come to conclude that the poetic standards of PoemHunter is suspect nowadays. I wonder, why am i here!

THREE: TOP Marks Full for you, Sunil. Enjoyed tremendously.

TWO: and now for the third time on Sunday, October 8. Congratulations on your election as The Modern Poem Of The Day, and remember: man proposes, but God disposes

ONE: your thoughts on God are very thought-provoking for me, Uni. First of all, I would like to congratulate you on your three-time election as Modern Poem of the Day, first in 2018, then in 2019 on the same day, October 22,

The style of expression of faith in God and closeness with Him is superb. A well deserved modern poem of the day.

What a great message in poetic form. It's great to know you recognize the power of our Father. Congratulations on POD,

Congrats Uni for being featured in the POD

In a Ghazal themes are usually connected to love and romance. This beautiful Ghazal misses that romance, no? Please, never create such a line, making God as evillish, I cite you here: " for our Lord in heaven above we are but a game" , I do not think so, Sunil Sir. CONGRATULATIONS, Sunil Sir, being chosen as The Modern Poem Of The Day. Hurray! Double Congrats, previous year the same honour, prize and even the date. God´s Blessings.

all day the devotees throng His shrine chanting His name spreading His fame desires they've sown for ages in their hearts if they don't sprout won't it be His shame? /// Ghazal in shekwa tone

deaf He may be to my pleas, uni, don't think on His love i'll forego my claim. .....so impressive. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the modern poem of POD.

A beautiful devotional Ghazal. It reads well.

He tests us at every step if we fail not He but we're ourselves to blame yeah very much true, Our God is really kind God. We just need to bear fruits to enjoy his glory on us. Thank you so much sir for sharing this poem. I would really like to invite you to read mine. I would be highly obliged. Regards, Ritika

All things remain the same! ! Thanks for sharing.

Nice poem. Yeah, He is there to take care of us always. Loved it.

Lovely poem in Ghazal form. Content-wise also, it is superb. Thanks, Dear Friend.

A thoughtful and mindful view of God and the need to understand 'he tests us at every step.'

A thoughtful write of wonderful tones? .......well written

nice devoted Ghazal

A fantastic comparison, which makes us think deeply about our existence, Congrats for POD....10++