Thursday, July 4, 2013

A Gentle Touch Comments

Rating: 4.7

When you touch me, I can say it's you
Even if my eyes are closed.
For your palms are like text books
That I've read so many times over,
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Khairul Ahsan
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me poet yeps poet 13 January 2021

your poem of love speaks all your five senses are still strong at 65 i am now retyred 80 plus

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Shaun Cronick 19 December 2020

A very intimate poem presenting honest and true human feelings of affection joyfully shared. We would be lost as a species without the sensation of touch alone, and mercifully that'll never happen. A poem that raises the poetry bar magnificently, when addressing the meeting and bonding of two human souls. Five stars bestowed and deservedly so. Thank you sir and simply enjoy life. Take care

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Akhtar Jawad 03 November 2020

Feelings are touches. Above a touch from any of the five senses is a touch for the hear, this touch is love and for this touch is the life. A great poem.

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Anjandev Roy 22 June 2020

An excellent piece.....enjoyed it...thanks.anjandev roy.

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Khairul Ahsan 15 November 2020

@Anjandev Roy, Thanks for visiting this old poem of mine and leaving a kind appreciation.

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Lovely and gentle a poem that Can spark two bodies afire!

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Khairul Ahsan 15 November 2020

Dear Poet Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair, Thanks for visiting my page and leaving some of your thoughts here. Appreciate your kind comment.

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Jette Blackstone 22 October 2017

This is a sweet, gentle love poem. I like many of your images, like a book, and the repeated use of the words, 'your touch' throughout. Very nice. Thanks for sharing.

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Khairul Ahsan 19 February 2018

I am much inspired by your having read this old poem of mine and commented on it. Greatly appreciate your kindness and thoughtfulness. This morning I've read your tribute to poet Sandra Feldman, a wonderful piece, and have commented on it.

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 June 2016

Even if my eyes are closed! Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us.

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Khairul Ahsan 27 May 2017

@Edward Kofi Louis, Thanks for reading the poem and leaving a comment.

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Elisabeth Wingle 04 May 2016

Beautifully written,

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Khairul Ahsan 27 May 2017

@Elisabeth Wingle, Thank you very much.

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Clarence Prince 31 March 2016

A gentle touch, can at times ignite much feeling, but we all need that gentle touch, which awakes love. Thanks for sharing this lovely love poem, Khairul!

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Khairul Ahsan 27 May 2017

@Clarence Prince, Much inspired by your thoughtful comment, dear poet. Thank you.

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Louis Rams 27 March 2016

a gentle touch like the rains which fall from the skies can be gentle and yet rough as it cleanses the heart and soul. powerful write!

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Khairul Ahsan 27 May 2017

Thanks for reading my poem and leaving your inspiring comment here, @Louis Rams.

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Melvina Germain 20 October 2015

Romantic, soothing and beautiful, two souls enjoying the sweetest touch that brings out the fire of love...Beautiful and intoxicating poem.....

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Khairul Ahsan 27 May 2017

@Melvina Germain, Your comment too is beautiful and sweet. Thanks for your inspiring words.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 October 2015

A gentle touch speaks about amazing and interesting touch definitely. Very wise sharing...10

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Khairul Ahsan 21 May 2017

Thank you, dear poet @Kumarmani Mahakul, for your generous rating and kind comment.

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Sranisha Francis 20 September 2015

A gentle touch, yes a gentle touch! Can spark two bodies afire. Neither wants it to remain gentle, its a warmth of love.

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Khairul Ahsan 13 October 2015

Thanks for reading my poem and leaving a comment. Much pleased, and appreciate!

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Marilyn Lott 06 November 2014

A very sweet and romantic poem. A lot of emotion flows between two people in love. I enjoyed it.

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Khairul Ahsan 13 October 2015

Thank you so much for your kind words. I am much inspired by your comment on my poem.

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Angelique' Rockwell 17 October 2014

Very romantic. The knowledge of your partner so deep that knowing them without seeing them for they are engraved in your subconscious. The one person you go through life with sharing the joys and hurts but also come together in passion. Beautifully and simply written. Thank you for sharing.

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Khairul Ahsan 13 October 2015

Thanks for reading my poem and for your kind words that you left here. I appreciate!

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Khairul Ahsan 05 May 2014

@ Ruma Chaudhuri, Thanks for liking my poem and leaving an appreciative comment here. I am inspired.

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Khairul Ahsan 05 May 2014

@ Hira Akhtar Thanks for reading my poem and commenting on it. I liked your comment.

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Ruma Chaudhuri 21 April 2014

Excellent poem. Romantic and a feeling of true love. Thanks of sharing this beautiful poem. Ruma

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Hira Akhtar 20 April 2014

OMG, tis so romantic ;) Sorry, I was kidding...lol A beautiful poem indeed about the chemistry of two very closely related persons having such a pure relation without any fear :) have a good time :) regards hira

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Khairul Ahsan 12 April 2014

@Tanya Ivanova Thank you very much for reading my poem and commenting on it. Your appreciation has inspired me. Please do not forget to rate the poems while you put your comments.

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