Friday, November 6, 2009

A Gentle Touch Comments

Rating: 4.6

blown by the wind the beauty of the past
smooth lips wear faded smiles
handful touch wishes hungry moves
countless teardrops on the floor....
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lady grace
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Your poem is like, a heavenly touch. Touches the heart, A beautiful write! ; D

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Ency Bearis 20 November 2009

lovely verses.....a gentle persuasion... I can feel it....10

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Noel Horlanda 19 November 2009

when tears dry and smiles grow leave the marks of solitude and sorrow with the touch of your hands i feel you are near i know you’re always here i know you're here dear… nicely crafted this part of the piece, I think I'm going to fall in love once more...please don't don't make me, yah know? You're the best, my lady...cheers 10+

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 November 2009

feel you are near i know you’re always here i know you're here dear…..what gentle touch to the hidden feeling and that is what is required in presnt day where true love is in scares... physical loe is given more importance... the love u feel in impulse is here.. beautiful depiction of wrods....10 read mine... mary to marry... a place called home.... visiting hell

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Fahad Witchking 07 November 2009

wow! (speechless) blows u away! like caressing ur mind! keep it up! cheers!

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Fahad Witchking 07 November 2009

wow! (speechless) blows u away! like caressing ur mind! keep it up! cheers!

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Eyan Desir 06 November 2009

A sweet poem....with a gentle touch

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Patti Masterman 06 November 2009

You really have the most gentle style of writing sometimes; it's just a whisper, which we must bend down to catch, but still thrills and holds us captive.(smile)

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Allan O 06 November 2009

lovely and well played...i enjoy your writtings... and hello Lady Grace..has not heard from you as late... ~^..^

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Susan Cook 06 November 2009

lovely poem.. well written. xxx

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Catrina Heart 06 November 2009

when tears dry and smiles grow leave the marks of solitude and sorrow with the touch of your hands i feel you are near i know you’re always here i know you're here… wow.......so lovely and every word touches the passion of hidden desires in you...lovely! ! ! wish you both best! ! !

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