Friday, April 26, 2013

A Gentle Reminder Comments

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Life is an eternal flow,
It is often a catching glow.
Life is often a passing show,
Here, we are friends and foe.
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Ravi Panamanna
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Dr Tapan Kumar Pradhan 26 April 2013

your ideas are good. But your rhyming is forced. A poem need not rhyme at all to be a good poem. Rhyme shhould come naturally.....! !

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Ravi Panamanna

Ravi Panamanna

Ottapalam- Kerala State- India
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